I asked some of my friends to read through my writing…heres what they had to say:
it doesn’t make sense to me
you can’t be serious with this
this is stupid
whats your point?
i dont understand why you waste so much time on it.
you can’t grow as a writer, you’re stuck
your writing is children’s book worthy at best
you can never get far with this
how do you even come up with this crap?
no one would buy these
don’t ever share these on Facebook again, my friends might see it
it doesn’t suit you
just stop, its a waste of time
i can’t believe you made me read this
dude, what is this?
are you depressed?
i think you need a therapist
are you trying to tell me something?
its something you do when you’re bored
you know, if you’re suicidal i won’t tell anyone
i have never seen so much crap in one place at a time
this is a joke right, i’m meant to laugh?
umm, i don’t get it
this is just for fun right?
I just think writers are jobless
you don’t really expect people to like these?
where did you copy them from? theres no way on earth you could be that good
i think i should tell your mum about these, you might need some help
does anyone know you write these? don’t show anyone this shit
you have to stop, its getting weird
dude, this shit is fucking creepy
most of these don’t make sense
you’ll grow out of it
i dont understand why she keeps wasting her time, its not even that good.